tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2465583196987100762.post2484376294469510107..comments2023-03-25T13:24:30.032+00:00Comments on Strange Imagination: ChallengeJanicehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09439166533963573577noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2465583196987100762.post-35032530847813181452008-07-05T14:18:00.000+00:002008-07-05T14:18:00.000+00:00A neat little tale with a fine twist at the end - ...A neat little tale with a fine twist at the end - at least for someone as dopey as me who didn't realise who Pauline was until after I'd finished reading.<BR/><BR/>MichaelAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2465583196987100762.post-14199039529236071882008-07-03T16:58:00.000+00:002008-07-03T16:58:00.000+00:00Dear Masquer, thank you for your encouragement. Pe...Dear Masquer, thank you for your encouragement. Perhaps they had a dinner, fell in love, decided to live together got a house, a dog and three children. Not sure really...smiles.<BR/><BR/>Dear Paul, thank you for your words. Not sure how I am supposed to take that remark about body and head. Is it a subtle way of telling me that I didn't describe him well?<BR/><BR/>Dear Mina, I loved your take onJanicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09439166533963573577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2465583196987100762.post-48478227606791256702008-07-01T11:02:00.000+00:002008-07-01T11:02:00.000+00:00Nice one Janice, I enjoyed her wavering thoughts, ...Nice one Janice, I enjoyed her wavering thoughts, and the verbal jousting between Pauline and Donatien. <BR/>Of course they were not their real names, it was all part of the dance they were playing.Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02208423803961169703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2465583196987100762.post-25843596469612670652008-06-28T22:23:00.000+00:002008-06-28T22:23:00.000+00:00Well done Janice this was an enjoyable read. I lo...Well done Janice this was an enjoyable read. I love all the emotions and thoughts. She is prim and being daring yet she becomes indignant, self-conscious, annoyed, subdued in different turns. Perhaps even seduced we might say. Pauline and Donatien, excellent names for an excellent experiment.<BR/><BR/>Hugs<BR/>MinaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2465583196987100762.post-78077639013023355142008-06-26T15:44:00.000+00:002008-06-26T15:44:00.000+00:00Janice, I won't critique either book.However, this...Janice, I won't critique either book.<BR/>However, this prologue is intriguingly interesting, had you considered adding a body to this head.<BR/>Pauline and Donatian take dinner?<BR/>Your writing is always worth waiting for.<BR/>Warm hugs,<BR/>Paul.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03790580459962602757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2465583196987100762.post-62376829563885075422008-06-26T13:52:00.000+00:002008-06-26T13:52:00.000+00:00Your account is -- interesting, or better still, i...Your account is -- interesting, or better still, intriguing. I like her uncertainty, masked by boldness, as it changes to candor. The end is a kicker: Pauline and Donatien, indeed. Please do consider a sequel!<BR/>MasquerAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com