Friday, 4 May 2007

Dialogue

'You could spank me.'

'Spank you?'

'Yes, spank me.'

'What do you mean?'

'You know, spank me, smack my bottom.'

'Doesn't that hurt?'

'Well, yes, that is... kind of...you know...well, it is...you know, the point.'

'I suppose it is...'

'It is easy, you just smack my...hm, bottom.'

'And it hurts?'

'Yes, it hurts.'

'That is mean.'

'Yes, a little mean.'

'Why?'

'Maybe you are angry with me.'

'No, I am not.'

'Don't you want to be a little mean?'

'No.'

'Yes you want to.'

'Well, sometimes.'

'Then, spank me!'

'But it hurts.'

'Yes, that is true.'

'But why?

'Maybe you want to punish me?'

'I don't want to punish you.'

'Perhaps, just perhaps, I deserve a punishment.'

'That is another matter.'

'So, you think I deserve a punishment?'

'Sometimes, yes.'

'Spank me, then!'

'.......Ok, then, if I...were to...you know...spank you.'

'Yes?'

'How would I do it?'

'Well, you should, really, decide how.'

'Any suggestions?'

'On my bottom?'

'Yes, you said that.'

'Seems natural.'

'Yes, it does...if natural is the word.'

'I don't know...'

'With what?'

'With what what?'

'With what should I spank you?'

'Oh...you could use your hand.'

'That seems...natural.'

'Or you could use something...like my hairbrush.'

'Ouch...that must hurt.'

'Yes, of course it hurts.'

'That is the general idea?'

'Yes, it is.'

'So I take a hairbrush to your bottom and then...'

'Then you smack it.'

'Just like that?'

'Yes, just like that.'

'I get the idea.'

'You could flip up my skirt first.'

'To make it worse.'

'You know, the skirt protects me.'

'You would be protected, it would hurt less.'

'That would not be true to the general idea.'

'I see your point. So I flip up your skirt?'

'And then smack my bottom.'

'And then smack your bottom.'

'Unless...'

'Unless what?'

'Unless, you would take down my knickers.'

'Oh...I see, to smack you...sort of, on the bare.'

'Yes, it hurts more.'

'Yes and that is the general idea.'

'You could say that.'

'Ok, then, go and get your hairbrush!'

'Yes, sir.'


7 comments:

Masquer said...

This is a new direction, a half-reversal of roles. Teaching, enticing the male to exercise a dominant role. Is he being wilfully obtose, is he distracted, can he simply not believe his good fortune, or is he merely obliging her? these are all interesting possibility. It seems clear who is in charge at present. Does this please her? Or, does she take the lead in hopes that the reversal will become complete? What do you other readers think, and prefer?

bolt said...

If this happened, bravo. If not, bravo. :P

Anonymous said...

I can't believe he wan't being wilfully obtuse. If he wasn't then he may not have a "spanko" bone in his body. But his decisive command at the end gives some hope for this couple.

Very good dialogue Janice.

Philip [from 360]

Janice said...

I love your discussion. You do give away that you are into giving rather than receiving spankings. No one wonders about her position.

Thanks for commenting!!

Janice

Anonymous said...

Well yes - ok - I gave myself away - lol. But I thought she was pretty clear as to what she wanted and was almost if not actually "topping from the bottom" as the phrase goes.

But then I'm a spanko man and maybe I see things not as others see it.

Keep up the fascinating work, Janice.

Philip xxx

Lothar said...

You make a good point, Janice. It might as easily have been written as a fantasy of a reluctant, inexperienced dom. But that is ever so much less interesting, for d or for s, because he would be (and indeed seems) an uninteresting person, himself. If, that is, virgin wannabe doms are uninteresting, which is not for me to answer.

Dove said...

I enjoyed this dialogue piece Janice. It made me smile. Phillip said she is 'topping from the bottom' and I agree. But if there is no top then what's a girl to do.

Dove